I like all your styles immensely -- I only have one style, so it's impressive. this one is period-influenced? to explain more fully what I was getting at: there's a lot of "L felt XYZ" in this, which mostly worked really well. like, I appreciated that it was a piece about a charged emotional dynamic and that you spelled that out. but it might have benefited from toning down the explicitness a notch or two in places.

I would totally comment-fic the sex -- if only I had time! I'm trying to get back to the chapter.