I like all your styles immensely -- I only have one style, so it's impressive.

Honestly, I'm relieved you can tell the difference! I think what I actually have is one style and I change the veneer. :)

this one is period-influenced?

Well...not really. Only in my head. It's inside-becca's-head-code-speak for when I try to pull back on brutal first-person modern-word-using angst and instead write something more formal and restrained but still seething with emotional bash-head-on-tree-melodrama. And tend to be more lax with the "Lee felt XYZ," aspects, which I usually have a weakness for attempting to convey indirectly through first-person biased narrative.

See? I need shorthand terminology! :p

However -

but it might have benefited from toning down the explicitness a notch or two in places.

Re-reading it, I agree with you.

I would totally comment-fic the sex -- if only I had time! I'm trying to get back to the chapter.

I support your decision to prioritise your chapter! :) Juliefic and Juliewriting are serious business!